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My wrist is shouting: HELP!!! Passed the whole day doing it, since morning O.O Brrrr~~
My Oc, Ryan :3
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:iconawesomesaucical:
First wow! Your shading work on this is wonderful! I can see why your hand would hurt! XD This is a wonderful piece! Cept (and this is me nit picking here) the bow. I shoot quite often, so be aware that my evaluation is fair. I love how the fingers are correct, (cept most shoot with three fingers) people miss that! Annoys me so much... Anyways, the bow. The hand holding the bow is off, and the bow should be held UP, and STRAIGHT, the arrow should be held by the hand in the middle of the bow, not farther up, not farther down, otherwise.. bad stuff will happen. (as I know) I like how the bow seemed kinda (bad word choice) squished, as he pulls back the string! Even though it's technically not correct, I personally like the way it looks. O! I love the outfit! The way you added texture to the cloth! Very nice! Also the way you scattered the leaves! Another thing, the sky. Is it raining???? Looks like it to me... I dunno though.... you might wanna fix that! I would do something to make it clearer! Up to you though! In all a very nice piece! Very nicely put together and overall effect! You should be proud!
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@Awesomesauceical i think the bow is pointed down because he is aiming at something and as you can see is on his knees, crouching. Any ways it is amazing and great doing it in pencil! i also love the backround but i think most of all the leaves are a great effect you get a 9/10! also as far as the originality i think it is very original and the impact was well but not perfect(not to get you down i still love the whole thing) anyways good job!
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Chibi Toastcat/Sebastian >3< CURSE U 100 WORD MINIMUUUUUUUUUM (lol jk) AGH 99 SHORT there we go!
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Rane95 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013
omg the details mate! so much of them~ °o°
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Ankdros Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, much much of them x'D they were such a headache to do~~
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Rane95 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013
;A; *rubs ankdros' head* Headache go away shoosh!
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Ankdros Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*poof-It goes away* Awww, that was so nice of yours, thanks ;u;
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Rane95 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013
;w; i'm glad it went away, cuz headaches are painful, both physically and mentally.
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Ankdros Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're right, they're awful ;o; Thanks again ^^ :iconsupertighthugplz:
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Rane95 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013
you're welcome~ ^_^
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Ankdros Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
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ChibiToastcat Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
oh one more thing i love how you added the little droplets on impact on hime it is great detail!
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Ankdros Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, you have a good eye! And thank you very much for the fav, also for the kind comment ;u;
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